Hey man! I gotta say, it does look very awesome!

I love the design, the helmet looks cool after all, he looks real kickass! I really, really love were you went here, it's fitting him perfect. And the sketch of Atross' torso behind looks neat as well.

But as much as I love this, I'm still not totally sure about chestplates. It's not for the visuals (they are awesome as they are), but for the effectiveness in general. His torso is pretty unprotected, and his vital organs are exposed to blaster rounds, vibroblade stabs and killer punches. It's just that a Mando's never taking chances, and it's really not to criticize your brilliant work on him. If I can't get you to try out chestplates, good enough, I don't want you to do something you're against... we can always say that Kharritokh is very self-confident and a little stubborn and doesn't bother about proper protection, but it'd still be nice if you could try giving him chestplates, just to see how it looks like - and only if you want, I don't wanna press you..

That said, amazing job, bro, thanks a million, I'm in your debt already. Vor entye.

Oh, and it's Kharritokh... *whistling*

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